Saturday, August 9, 2008

the promise of an apple

Hello everyone, this is my fanfiction. My English is not good. Hope you understand my fanfiction.

The promise of an apple

In the dark sky, snow fall down very softy. Sky is full of shinning stars and one shooting star is crossing through the sky.

In a beautiful Europe style villa, there is a little girl who is turning to five years old, and her name is Haruhi Fujioka. She is having a big grand birthday party in there. In this party, all of the people are very rich,

“Hey, this apple is for you, when you grow up, you have to give me all the red apples from the world and marry me.” Haruhi has white skin and big brown eyes, tie her black hair with a pink ribbon bow. She’s wearing a pink dress, very cute just looks like doll. Haruhi holds the apple to the little boy. The little boy’s name is Tamaki Suou. Tamaki has same age as Haruhi. He is wearing a hat. He is looking at the apple and wants to take it.

“Give it to me, I want to eat.” Suddenly, there is very rude boy who has light brown hair and dress in western style clothes take the apple and start eating it.

“I don’t want you to marry me, why you eat my apple?” Haruhi is angry and want to give him a big hit.

“Who want to marry you, you are so ugly.” The brown hair boy throws the apple on the floor and run away.

Haruhi is very angry and starts to cry.

“Please don’t cry, I eat the apple for you.” Tamaki said. And the pick up the apple from the floor and start to eat. While Tamaki is eating the apple, Haruhi stop crying and laugh and laugh.

“Remember, this apple is our promise.” Haruhi said.

“Yes, ok.” Tamaki answers.

After that, everyday is happy day for them, they went to school together, and have dinner together. If there is a place have apple, Tamaki always get one for Haruhi. Because he always keeps the promise in his heart and never forget.

Twelve years later

One day, Haruhi hear a bad news from Tamaki.

“I am going to leave tomorrow.” Tamaki said.

“Why?” Haruhi very surprises.

“My parents. Their company is moving to the new town, it’s far away from here. This job is so important to them. They need the job. So we have to move as soon as we can.” Tamaki answered.

“So… So when you come back??” Haruhi look at Tamaki.

“I don’t know.” Tamaki said.

Haruhi start crying. “Are you not coming back anymore?”

“No. when I have time. I will come back and I will write letter to you. And I promise you I come back in your birthday celebrate with you every year” Tamaki Said.

“You promise? Haruhi asked.

“Yes, trust me.” Tamaki said.

After that, they smile together and embraced each other.

Tamaki have been to move to the new place for three years. Haruhi is smart girl and has very high mark in her high school exams. So she studies in one of the famous collage in her town now. This year is her final year of her collage. She goes to school everyday and work very hard for her final exam. In the weekend sometimes will go shopping with her friends or stay at home for study. Haruhi always receives letter and apple from Tamaki. Of course the apple is big and red. In the letter, Tamaki tells her a lot of fanny things he did there and how was he there. Sometimes they will talk in the phone. Haruhi always waits for her birthday, because Tamaki is coming back to celebrate with her and bring her a big red apple to her for her birthday present. Haruhi is very happy she has receives the letter and can hear the voice from Tamaki. So during these three years Haruhi not looks unhappy everyday because she deeply believe Tamaki remember their promise and will come back marry her after few years.

Winter is coming, and this year is the fourth year that Tamaki moves. Haruhi graduate form her collage and get a job in a company. In this year Haruhi didn’t receives any letters and phone call from Tamaki. Even she writes a lots letters or phone to Tamaki, but still no reply and answer form him. Haruhi is very worry about Tamaki, she very want to know why Tamaki not write letter and phone her in this year. So Haruhi found the address on the letter that Tamaki posted to her. And decide to go there to find Tamaki.
Today is Haruhi’s birthday. She’s taking the train. She’s on the way to find Tamaki. It takes about five hours to arrive. In the train, Haruhi very worry and want to arrive there as soon as possible.

Finally, Haruhi is arrivies there. This is a very quite beautiful place and people in here are very nice. And also Haruhi can smell apple’s taste here, because in this place has plant a lot of apple trees and is the famous place for selling apples to other country. Haruhi get the address out and ask one nice old women. This old women is very nice, she shows Haruhi how to get there. Takes about one hour, Haruhi get there. In front of her is a beautiful small Europe style villa. She pushes the bell that next to the door. Then two people come out. They are Tamaki’s parents.

“Hello, auntie and uncle, my name is Haruhi Fujioka, nice to see you.” Haruhi very polite to said.

“Hello Haruhi, we know you, Tamaki always talk about you.” Tamaki’s mother smile and said.

Haruhi looks very happy. “I am looking for Tamaki, is he here?” Haruhi asked.

When Haruhi say “Tamaki” this word, Tamaki’s parents suddenly looks very sad. Haruhi feels something wrong, and then ask them again. “What’s the matter?” Haruhi asked.

“Tamaki is not here anymore, he’s in the haven now.” Tamaki’s Father said.

When Haruhi hear this, just stand there and has tear in her eyes. One minute pass, she starts talking again. “When did he die?”

“He died this year.” his parents said.

“Why? How he dies?” Haruhi asked.

“That day, Tamaki said Haruhi’s birthday is coming, he found a apply tree and has a lots big red apples on that apple tree, so he was decide to pick one for Haruhi for her birthday present. But that apple tree is very tall, we told him not to go there, but he was not listening to us. When he arrive there, he start climb up to tree, he climb very high, when he want to pick the apple, he stepped wrong, then felt down from the tree. Because too much bleeding, the doctors can’t save his life. In his hand, he still holding the apple” Tamaki’s father said and pass the apple to Haruhi.

Haruhi is crying and crying, she is very happy in her heart, because Tamaki is still remembering their promise in his heart all the time. Haruhi’s eyes are full of tears she is holding apple not saying any things and remember Tamaki’s face in her brain.

4 comments:

Soflea said...

= D i can just picture the characters lol i love this anime as well, i think you've made it better? lool

Jiaen Chen said...

yes, this anime is very funny. i love this anime as well. anyway thank you for reading my fanfiction. i hope to see yours later...

Unknown said...

i love this anime also. it is so pure and lovely story. and this fiction give me the same feeling with original anime. although this fiction is not a happy ending, i still feel warm.

Clara L said...

I have never seen this anime, but your story was really interesting. So I start to find this anime. I will read your story again after watch this anime. Really enjoyed! ♥