Monday, August 11, 2008

Seventh dwarf who loved Snow White

This is my fanfiction ^ ^ not really good at English.
Please enjoy it and leave a comment =)
The original story of Snow white is happy ending is, “Together, the Prince and Snow White rode off to his castle, where they lived happily ever after (Disney Enterprises, 2008).” However there was one person who felt sad after princess left with prince. The Seventh dwarf, I will write the story about him who is the most loved Snow White.

The Seven Dwarfs who owned the cottage were busy working. All day long they dug for jewels. The Seven Dwarfs are Doc, Grumpy, Happy, Sleepy, Sneezy, Bashful, and Dopey. One day, Snow White ran away from her stepmother, and came to their place. She explained to the Dwarfs who she was and what the evil Queen had planned for her. Snow White wanted to stay at their place.
“If you let me stay, I will wash and sew and sweep and cook.”
Snow White promised. Dwarfs shouted and welcomed her. They introduced themselves but one dwarf did not say anything.
“His name is Dopey, he can’t speak but you can understand his body language”
Dopey hided behind the table, his face was dyed red.

The next morning, Snow White was spending same day. At that time, Dopey entered and gave a flower to Snow White shyly. She received his gift with beautiful smiling.
“It’s really pretty flower, what’s the name of this flower?”
Snow White was lived in the castle so she had never seen this flower. Dopey thought something and tried to show her with gesture. He represented the sereneness and moisture of the fog by using a motion of arms and a gentle smile.
“Sereneness…? And…… Sorry, I do not understand.”
“This flower called Gypsophila, you can see everywhere in this area.” Doc said.
“The sereneness and moisture of the fog… it looks good”
However Dopey felt sorrowful because his movement did not make communicating to her. This means that the conversation will difficult between Dopey and Snow White from this time forward. At that time, Snow White kissed Dopey.
“Thank you, Dopey.”
He fell in love with Snow White.

From the shadows of the trees, the Queen watched the Dwarfs leave. Slowly she crept up to the cottage. Then she offered the poisoned apple to Snow White.
“All alone, my pet? Go on, have a bite.”
Sensing danger, the forest animals ran off to warn the Dwarfs. But it was too late. Snow White bit into the poisoned fruit. She fell to the ground.
“Now I will be the fairest in the land! No one save you Snow White, only the prince can awake you.”
The Queen left with mystery laughing. The behind of the tree, a deer listened her voice. When Dwarfs arrived, a deer told them what happened to her. The heartbroken Dwarfs built a coffin for Snow White and watched over her day and night. Suddenly Dopey stood up and tried to say something to Doc with gestures.
“Dopey! It’s too dangerous! People don’t like us, you know that!”
“He is right! You can’t do it!”
But Dopey did not listen their voices, he started to run toward the village.

Finally Dopey arrived the village, and he tried to find the prince. In front of the castle, soldiers made precautions and took a threatening attitude to Dopey. He could not enter the castle, so he shouted for helping princess but the voice did not come out. At that time, the prince appeared in front of Dopey suddenly. The prince felt something that happened through Dopey’s eye. Dopey was pointing to the forest and started dancing that represents the death of princess. The Prince went toward the forest with Dopey.

“Look! Dopey came back with the prince!”
Other dwarfs were greeting Dopey and the prince. The prince had searched far and wide for the beautiful princess. With great sorrow, he kissed Snow White farewell. Snow White began to wake.
“The Prince’s kiss had broken the spell!”
The Dwarfs cheered and hugged one another joyously.
“Mmm.. What happened?”
The prince explained what happened to her, and he asked her to live in the castle. Snow White agreed because she fell in love with the prince. Snow White thanked the Dwarfs for all they had done. Dopey just watched until they disappear. But he could not just let her go. Suddenly he started to run and climbed the hill. He could see Snow White from the top of the hill, and danced for representing his love to her. But Snow White did not aware his love.

‘When she fell in sleep, a person who felt the saddest,
When she fell in sleep, a person who tried to find the prince for saving her life,
When she left from the forest, a person who ran to the hill,
……………………………………… it was Dopey, the Seventh Dwarf’

Until this time people could not remember the Seventh Dwarf who loved Snow White.

4 comments:

Soflea said...

well, this made me thought..erm..
the seventh drawf was the one to love snow white the most but he couldn't stand out and confess his love cuz well, obviously the prince was better than him in everyway. so this kinda says that the status of a person overwhelms the depth of love? ...lol anyways , one sided love is always sad

Jiaen Chen said...

this gives me another feeling of "snow white". becuase i aways think the seven dwarfs are very happy that snow white can found her ture love and live with the prince.but the ending of the story is very sad. i can underdtand the feeling of Dopey. because he loves snow white but can't say it out.

this is a very good story!!!

Unknown said...

this let me to associate 'The Little Mermaid'. the fairy tale story is simple, but I always thought that they are cause people to think deeply. before i always put my vision on princess and prince's happy life. now i thought the leads are these person who offer silently. perhaps they do not have the attractive appearance and prominent status,Even does not have happy ending. they ever do not haggle over these. how lovely they are. erm...i suddenly thought that princess and prince is very superficial...

Clara L said...

Thank you for reading my story. = )